Room 1 has been learning how to write an introduction to their recount writing. They have learnt that they need to say when their news happened, who was there, where they went and why.
Why don't you read Room 1's introductions and talk about which part tells you when, who, where and why.
On the weekend Mum, Dad, Lola, Greta and me went to Crystal Mountain because we had nothing to do. Molly
On Sunday night some friends, me and my family played cricket to have some fun. Ethan
On Friday me, Mum, uncle and her friends went to Bethells beach to have some fun. Clarice
On Monday me and my mum went to Hollie's party to have fun. Hazel
On Sunday I went to Rio's house for a swim. Lucian
On Saturday me, Mum and Dad went to the movies. Deklan
In the weekend me, my mum and my dad and my baby brother Niko went to Wellington for the 70's. Mila
On Monday I went to Hollie's party at Hollie's house. Rosie
On Saturday me and my sister and my uncle we went to Rainbows End to have fun. Sumit
On Friday me and my brother and his friends went to the movies for my brothers birthday party. Red
On the weekend I went to Hollie's house for her party. Ruth
On Monday me and my family came to my house. It was for my sisters birthday. Cherry
On Monday, Mum, Dad, Charlize, Nikki, Dante and me were at home to play with Dante and to have fun. Kassidy
On Monday me, Jake, Mum, and Dad went on a walk so we got to look at lots of trees. Zach
On Sunday me and my Mum went to my aunties house for fun. Liseti
On the weekend me, my dad and Enzo went to the city to have some fun. Zylah
On Saturday, Mum and I went to get ice cream because we were lucky. Micheal
On Monday me, Mum and Cam went to the zoo to have fun. Kayne
Talofa Room1, great sharing and I must say everyone in this class must of had a whole lot of fun in the last few weeks. Everyone did a good job with their introductions. Well done. I will try and keep up with your blog.
ReplyDeleteOtalani
Hi Room 1,
ReplyDeleteI noticed exactly what Otalani noticed, everyone must have had a lot of fun lately! You are so lucky to spend your weekends doing such fun things.
I was very impressed with your introductions and they all told me 'when', 'where', 'who' and 'why'. Great job.
Kia ora Room 1,
ReplyDeleteYou have all succeed in your learning intention of telling 'when', 'where', 'who' and 'why'. It is obvious you are a class who like to have fun.
Hi Room 1,
ReplyDeletesome great sentences on what you all did in the weekend!Some of you were lucky enough to go and have heaps of fun!You showed me the when,who and why.
Ka pai!
Jennifer
Hi Room 1
ReplyDeleteWe loved your weekend writing. The sentences were interesting. We liked how you included when, where, who and why.
From Room 16
NICE WRITING FROM ALEX
ReplyDeleteHi room 1
Deletesounds like you had a great weekend you did lots of things
we wish we did all the things you did
keep up the great blog
from Eva and Langi